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 \chapter{Conclusion}
+\label{c:conclusion}
 % Just a little knot to tie the paper together.
 
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 % The highest level overview of Cforall and EHMs. Get this done right away.
-This thesis goes over the design and implementation of the exception handling
+This thesis covers the design and implementation of the exception handling
 mechanism (EHM) of
 \CFA (pronounced sea-for-all and may be written Cforall or CFA).
-\CFA is a new programming language that extends C, that maintains
+\CFA is a new programming language that extends C, which maintains
 backwards-compatibility while introducing modern programming features.
 Adding exception handling to \CFA gives it new ways to handle errors and
-make other large control-flow jumps.
+make large control-flow jumps.
 
 % Now take a step back and explain what exceptions are generally.
 Exception handling provides dynamic inter-function control flow.
+A language's EHM is a combination of language syntax and run-time
+components that construct, raise, propagate and handle exceptions,
+to provide all of that control flow.
 There are two forms of exception handling covered in this thesis:
 termination, which acts as a multi-level return,
 and resumption, which is a dynamic function call.
-Termination handling is much more common,
-to the extent that it is often seen
-This seperation is uncommon because termination exception handling is so
-much more common that it is often assumed.
-% WHY: Mention other forms of continuation and \cite{CommonLisp} here?
-A language's EHM is the combination of language syntax and run-time
-components that are used to construct, raise and handle exceptions,
-including all control flow.
-
-Termination exception handling allows control to return to any previous
-function on the stack directly, skipping any functions between it and the
-current function.
+% About other works:
+Often, when this separation is not made, termination exceptions are assumed
+as they are more common and may be the only form of handling provided in
+a language.
+
+All types of exception handling link a raise with a handler.
+Both operations are usually language primitives, although raises can be
+treated as a primitive function that takes an exception argument.
+Handlers are more complex as they are added to and removed from the stack
+during execution, must specify what they can handle and give the code to
+handle the exception.
+
+Exceptions work with different execution models but for the descriptions
+that follow a simple call stack, with functions added and removed in a
+first-in-last-out order, is assumed.
+
+Termination exception handling searches the stack for the handler, then
+unwinds the stack to where the handler was found before calling it.
+The handler is run inside the function that defined it and when it finishes
+it returns control to that function.
 \begin{center}
 \input{callreturn}
 \end{center}
 
-Resumption exception handling seaches the stack for a handler and then calls
-it without adding or removing any other stack frames.
-\todo{Add a diagram showing control flow for resumption.}
+Resumption exception handling searches the stack for a handler and then calls
+it without removing any other stack frames.
+The handler is run on top of the existing stack, often as a new function or
+closure capturing the context in which the handler was defined.
+After the handler has finished running it returns control to the function
+that preformed the raise, usually starting after the raise.
+\begin{center}
+\input{resumption}
+\end{center}
 
 Although a powerful feature, exception handling tends to be complex to set up
 and expensive to use
-so they are often limited to unusual or ``exceptional" cases.
-The classic example of this is error handling, exceptions can be used to
-remove error handling logic from the main execution path and while paying
+so it is often limited to unusual or ``exceptional" cases.
+The classic example is error handling, exceptions can be used to
+remove error handling logic from the main execution path, and pay
 most of the cost only when the error actually occurs.
 
@@ -62,5 +79,4 @@
 }
 \end{cfa}
-
 % A note that yes, that was a very fast overview.
 The design and implementation of all of \CFA's EHM's features are
@@ -69,110 +85,123 @@
 
 % The current state of the project and what it contributes.
-All of these features have been implemented in \CFA, along with
-a suite of test cases as part of this project.
+All of these features have been implemented in \CFA,
+covering both changes to the compiler and the run-time.
+In addition, a suite of test cases and performance benchmarks were created
+along side the implementation.
 The implementation techniques are generally applicable in other programming
 languages and much of the design is as well.
-Some parts of the EHM use other features unique to \CFA and these would be
+Some parts of the EHM use other features unique to \CFA and would be
 harder to replicate in other programming languages.
-
-% Talk about other programming languages.
-Some existing programming languages that include EHMs/exception handling
-include C++, Java and Python. All three examples focus on termination
-exceptions which unwind the stack as part of the
-Exceptions also can replace return codes and return unions.
 
 The contributions of this work are:
 \begin{enumerate}
 \item Designing \CFA's exception handling mechanism, adapting designs from
-other programming languages and the creation of new features.
-\item Implementing stack unwinding and the EHM in \CFA, including updating
-the compiler and the run-time environment.
+other programming languages and creating new features.
+\item Implementing stack unwinding and the \CFA EHM, including updating
+the \CFA compiler and the run-time environment.
 \item Designed and implemented a prototype virtual system.
 % I think the virtual system and per-call site default handlers are the only
 % "new" features, everything else is a matter of implementation.
+\item Creating tests to check the behaviour of the EHM.
+\item Creating benchmarks to check the performances of the EHM,
+as compared to other languages.
 \end{enumerate}
 
-\todo{I can't figure out a good lead-in to the roadmap.}
-The next section covers the existing state of exceptions.
+The rest of this thesis is organized as follows.
+The current state of exceptions is covered in \autoref{s:background}.
 The existing state of \CFA is also covered in \autoref{c:existing}.
-The new features are introduced in \autoref{c:features},
-which explains their usage and design.
-That is followed by the implementation of those features in
+New EHM features are introduced in \autoref{c:features},
+covering their usage and design.
+That is followed by the implementation of these features in
 \autoref{c:implement}.
-The performance results are examined in \autoref{c:performance}.
+Performance results are examined in \autoref{c:performance}.
 Possibilities to extend this project are discussed in \autoref{c:future}.
+Finally, the project is summarized in \autoref{c:conclusion}.
 
 \section{Background}
 \label{s:background}
 
-Exception handling is not a new concept,
-with papers on the subject dating back 70s.\cite{Goodenough}
-
-Early exceptions were often treated as signals. They carried no information
-except their identity. Ada still uses this system.
+Exception handling has been examined before in programming languages,
+with papers on the subject dating back 70s.\cite{Goodenough75}
+Early exceptions were often treated as signals, which carried no information
+except their identity. Ada still uses this system.\todo{cite Ada}
 
 The modern flag-ship for termination exceptions is \Cpp,
 which added them in its first major wave of non-object-orientated features
 in 1990.
-% https://en.cppreference.com/w/cpp/language/history
-\Cpp has the ability to use any value of any type as an exception.
-However that seems to immediately pushed aside for classes inherited from
+\todo{cite https://en.cppreference.com/w/cpp/language/history}
+Many EHMs have special exception types,
+however \Cpp has the ability to use any type as an exception.
+These were found to be not very useful and have been pushed aside for classes
+inheriting from
 \code{C++}{std::exception}.
-Although there is a special catch-all syntax it does not allow anything to
-be done with the caught value becuase nothing is known about it.
-So instead a base type is defined with some common functionality (such as
+Although there is a special catch-all syntax (@catch(...)@) there are no
+operations that can be performed on the caught value, not even type inspection.
+Instead the base exception-type \code{C++}{std::exception} defines common
+functionality (such as
 the ability to describe the reason the exception was raised) and all
-exceptions have that functionality.
-This seems to be the standard now, as the garentied functionality is worth
-any lost flexibility from limiting it to a single type.
-
-Java was the next popular language to use exceptions.
+exceptions have this functionality.
+That trade-off, restricting usable types to gain guaranteed functionality,
+is almost universal now, as without some common functionality it is almost
+impossible to actually handle any errors.
+
+Java was the next popular language to use exceptions. \todo{cite Java}
 Its exception system largely reflects that of \Cpp, except that requires
 you throw a child type of \code{Java}{java.lang.Throwable}
 and it uses checked exceptions.
-Checked exceptions are part of the function interface they are raised from.
-This includes functions they propogate through, until a handler for that
-type of exception is found.
-This makes exception information explicit, which can improve clarity and
-safety, but can slow down programming.
-Some of these, such as dealing with high-order methods or an overly specified
-throws clause, are technical. However some of the issues are much more
-human, in that writing/updating all the exception signatures can be enough
-of a burden people will hack the system to avoid them.
-Including the ``catch-and-ignore" pattern where a catch block is used without
-anything to repair or recover from the exception.
-
-%\subsection
-Resumption exceptions have been much less popular.
-Although resumption has a history as old as termination's, very few
+Checked exceptions are part of a function's interface,
+the exception signature of the function.
+Every function that could be raised from a function, either directly or
+because it is not handled from a called function, is given.
+Using this information, it is possible to statically verify if any given
+exception is handled and guarantee that no exception will go unhandled.
+Making exception information explicit improves clarity and safety,
+but can slow down or restrict programming.
+For example, programming high-order functions becomes much more complex
+if the argument functions could raise exceptions.
+However, as odd it may seem, the worst problems are rooted in the simple
+inconvenience of writing and updating exception signatures.
+This has caused Java programmers to develop multiple programming ``hacks''
+to circumvent checked exceptions, negating their advantages.
+One particularly problematic example is the ``catch-and-ignore'' pattern,
+where an empty handler is used to handle an exception without doing any
+recovery or repair. In theory that could be good enough to properly handle
+the exception, but more often is used to ignore an exception that the       
+programmer does not feel is worth the effort of handling it, for instance if
+they do not believe it will ever be raised.
+If they are incorrect the exception will be silenced, while in a similar
+situation with unchecked exceptions the exception would at least activate    
+the language's unhandled exception code (usually program abort with an  
+error message).
+
+%\subsection
+Resumption exceptions are less popular,
+although resumption is as old as termination; hence, few
 programming languages have implemented them.
 % http://bitsavers.informatik.uni-stuttgart.de/pdf/xerox/parc/techReports/
 %   CSL-79-3_Mesa_Language_Manual_Version_5.0.pdf
-Mesa is one programming languages that did. Experiance with Mesa
+Mesa is one programming language that did.\todo{cite Mesa} Experience with Mesa
 is quoted as being one of the reasons resumptions were not
 included in the \Cpp standard.
 % https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Exception_handling
-Since then resumptions have been ignored in the main-stream.
-
-All of this does call into question the use of resumptions, is
-something largely rejected decades ago worth revisiting now?
-Yes, even if it was the right call at the time there have been decades
-of other developments in computer science that have changed the situation
-since then.
-Some of these developments, such as in functional programming's resumption
-equivalent: algebraic effects\cite{Zhang19}, are directly related to
-resumptions as well.
-A complete rexamination of resumptions is beyond a single paper, but it is
-enough to try them again in \CFA.
+Since then resumptions have been ignored in main-stream programming languages.
+However, resumption is being revisited in the context of decades of other
+developments in programming languages.
+While rejecting resumption may have been the right decision in the past,
+the situation has changed since then.
+Some developments, such as the function programming equivalent to resumptions,
+algebraic effects\cite{Zhang19}, are enjoying success.
+A complete reexamination of resumptions is beyond this thesis,
+but there reemergence is enough to try them in \CFA.
 % Especially considering how much easier they are to implement than
-% termination exceptions.
+% termination exceptions and how much Peter likes them.
 
 %\subsection
 Functional languages tend to use other solutions for their primary error
-handling mechanism, exception-like constructs still appear.
-Termination appears in error construct, which marks the result of an
-expression as an error, the result of any expression that tries to use it as
-an error, and so on until an approprate handler is reached.
-Resumption appears in algebric effects, where a function dispatches its
+handling mechanism, but exception-like constructs still appear.
+Termination appears in the error construct, which marks the result of an
+expression as an error; then the result of any expression that tries to use
+it also results in an error, and so on until an appropriate handler is reached.
+Resumption appears in algebraic effects, where a function dispatches its
 side-effects to its caller for handling.
 
@@ -180,39 +209,45 @@
 More recently exceptions seem to be vanishing from newer programming
 languages, replaced by ``panic".
-In Rust a panic is just a program level abort that may be implemented by
-unwinding the stack like in termination exception handling.
+In Rust, a panic is just a program level abort that may be implemented by
+unwinding the stack like in termination exception handling.\todo{cite Rust}
 % https://doc.rust-lang.org/std/panic/fn.catch_unwind.html
-Go's panic through is very similar to a termination except it only supports
+Go's panic through is very similar to a termination, except it only supports
 a catch-all by calling \code{Go}{recover()}, simplifying the interface at
-the cost of flexability.
-
-%\subsection
-Exception handling's most common use cases are in error handling.
-Here are some other ways to handle errors and comparisons with exceptions.
+the cost of flexibility.\todo{cite Go}
+
+%\subsection
+While exception handling's most common use cases are in error handling,
+here are some other ways to handle errors with comparisons with exceptions.
 \begin{itemize}
 \item\emph{Error Codes}:
-This pattern uses an enumeration (or just a set of fixed values) to indicate
-that an error has occured and which error it was.
-
-There are some issues if a function wants to return an error code and another
-value. The main issue is that it can be easy to forget checking the error
-code, which can lead to an error being quitely and implicitly ignored.
-Some new languages have tools that raise warnings if the return value is
-discarded to avoid this.
-It also puts more code on the main execution path.
+This pattern has a function return an enumeration (or just a set of fixed
+values) to indicate if an error has occurred and possibly which error it was.
+
+Error codes mix exceptional/error and normal values, enlarging the range of
+possible return values. This can be addressed with multiple return values
+(or a tuple) or a tagged union.
+However, the main issue with error codes is forgetting to check them,
+which leads to an error being quietly and implicitly ignored.
+Some new languages and tools will try to issue warnings when an error code
+is discarded to avoid this problem.
+Checking error codes also bloats the main execution path,
+especially if the error is not handled immediately hand has to be passed
+through multiple functions before it is addressed.
+
 \item\emph{Special Return with Global Store}:
-A function that encounters an error returns some value indicating that it
-encountered a value but store which error occured in a fixed global location.
-
-Perhaps the C standard @errno@ is the most famous example of this,
-where some standard library functions will return some non-value (often a
-NULL pointer) and set @errno@.
-
-This avoids the multiple results issue encountered with straight error codes
-but otherwise many of the same advantages and disadvantages.
-It does however introduce one other major disadvantage:
-Everything that uses that global location must agree on all possible errors.
+Similar to the error codes pattern but the function itself only returns
+that there was an error
+and store the reason for the error in a fixed global location.
+For example many routines in the C standard library will only return some
+error value (such as -1 or a null pointer) and the error code is written into
+the standard variable @errno@.
+
+This approach avoids the multiple results issue encountered with straight
+error codes but otherwise has the same disadvantages and more.
+Every function that reads or writes to the global store must agree on all
+possible errors and managing it becomes more complex with concurrency.
+
 \item\emph{Return Union}:
-Replaces error codes with a tagged union.
+This pattern replaces error codes with a tagged union.
 Success is one tag and the errors are another.
 It is also possible to make each possible error its own tag and carry its own
@@ -220,40 +255,44 @@
 so that one type can be used everywhere in error handling code.
 
-This pattern is very popular in functional or semi-functional language,
-anything with primitive support for tagged unions (or algebraic data types).
-% We need listing Rust/rust to format code snipits from it.
+This pattern is very popular in any functional or semi-functional language
+with primitive support for tagged unions (or algebraic data types).
+% We need listing Rust/rust to format code snippets from it.
 % Rust's \code{rust}{Result<T, E>}
-
-The main disadvantage is again it puts code on the main execution path.
-This is also the first technique that allows for more information about an
-error, other than one of a fix-set of ids, to be sent.
-They can be missed but some languages can force that they are checked.
-It is also implicitly forced in any languages with checked union access.
+The main advantage is that an arbitrary object can be used to represent an
+error so it can include a lot more information than a simple error code.
+The disadvantages include that the it does have to be checked along the main
+execution and if there aren't primitive tagged unions proper usage can be
+hard to enforce.
+
 \item\emph{Handler Functions}:
-On error the function that produced the error calls another function to
+This pattern associates errors with functions.
+On error, the function that produced the error calls another function to
 handle it.
 The handler function can be provided locally (passed in as an argument,
 either directly as as a field of a structure/object) or globally (a global
 variable).
-
-C++ uses this as its fallback system if exception handling fails.
-\snake{std::terminate_handler} and for a time \snake{std::unexpected_handler}
-
-Handler functions work a lot like resumption exceptions.
-The difference is they are more expencive to set up but cheaper to use, and
-so are more suited to more fequent errors.
-The exception being global handlers if they are rarely change as the time
-in both cases strinks towards zero.
+C++ uses this approach as its fallback system if exception handling fails,
+such as \snake{std::terminate_handler} and, for a time,
+\snake{std::unexpected_handler}.
+
+Handler functions work a lot like resumption exceptions,
+but without the dynamic search for a handler.
+Since setting up the handler can be more complex/expensive,
+especially when the handler has to be passed through multiple layers of
+function calls, but cheaper (constant time) to call,
+they are more suited to more frequent (less exceptional) situations.
 \end{itemize}
 
 %\subsection
-Because of their cost exceptions are rarely used for hot paths of execution.
-There is an element of self-fulfilling prophocy here as implementation
-techniques have been designed to make exceptions cheap to set-up at the cost
-of making them expencive to use.
-Still, use of exceptions for other tasks is more common in higher-level
-scripting languages.
-An iconic example is Python's StopIteration exception which is thrown by
-an iterator to indicate that it is exausted. Combined with Python's heavy
-use of the iterator based for-loop.
+Because of their cost, exceptions are rarely used for hot paths of execution.
+Hence, there is an element of self-fulfilling prophecy as implementation
+techniques have been focused on making them cheap to set-up,
+happily making them expensive to use in exchange.
+This difference is less important in higher-level scripting languages,
+where using exception for other tasks is more common.
+An iconic example is Python's \code{Python}{StopIteration} exception that
+is thrown by an iterator to indicate that it is exhausted.
+When paired with Python's iterator-based for-loop this will be thrown every
+time the end of the loop is reached.
+\todo{Cite Python StopIteration and for-each loop.}
 % https://docs.python.org/3/library/exceptions.html#StopIteration
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 \lstMakeShortInline@
 \lstset{language=CFA,style=cfacommon,basicstyle=\linespread{0.9}\tt}
-\lstset{moredelim=**[is][\protect\color{red}]{@}{@}}
 % Annotations from Peter:
 \newcommand{\PAB}[1]{{\color{blue}PAB: #1}}
@@ -246,4 +245,5 @@
 \input{performance}
 \input{future}
+\input{conclusion}
 
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